The news that Lizzie Borden's house is
up for sale, prompted me to revisit this flash, which won the Fish Criminally Short Histories Prize. (NB: the house for sale isn't the one where the murders took place. That house is a B&B where ghouls can enjoy the last breakfast eaten by Lizzie's father and stepmother. You can book this luxury break via a site calling itself Homes of the Rich and Famous. Nice.)
Fall River was originally published in the Fish Anthology.
Fall River, August 1892
It was such a very hot day, the air flapping like
a thick cloth in her face. She escaped the chores in the house, wandered into
the yard.
The prosecution said
she didn’t visit the barn; the dust hadn’t been disturbed, they said, but
Lizzie remembered the baking heat of the place, so parched a stray spark
might’ve set it alight. The whole day was like that, tinder-dry, ready to go
up.
Abby was
feather-dusting the furniture, fat slapping above her elbows, sweat wetting the
armpits of her dress. Bridget was washing windows; you could hear the sloppy
sound of the water from the back end of the yard.
The sky
was stretched like the skin on a drum, the sun beating there in a fury. Lizzie
turned a fretful circle in the yard. She longed for lightning to slice the sky
wide open, for the kiss of rain on her sun-battered skin.
She went
indoors before Father returned from work. She wore the cotton calico, sky-blue.
Later, she put on heavy silk, winter bengaline they called it, navy-blue with
pale flowers printed on the skirt. Too much dress for such a warm day. She was
glad when the police took it away.
Abby saw
her coming, tried to run. Whack, whack, whack. Her head wouldn’t leave her
shoulders, not quite, too many rubbery rolls of flesh in the way.
Father
was weary, propping his cheek on a cushion like a little boy. One whack and he
was gone. Red pearls beaded the wall behind his head.
Lizzie
rolled paper and lit the stove. The hot day sucked up the smoke and turned the
wood to white. She thrust the axe in.
Ash leapt
and clung to the ruddy head of the blade, flying up from the hearth like
feathers.
4 comments:
I well remember this brilliant flash, Sarah!
Thanks, Frances! I remember you were one of the writer in FF1 who helped me polish it for submitting to Fish.
Great! I could picture it so clearly.
Thanks, Jamara.
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