Thursday, 10 December 2009

Love is a Colour, Green is a Taste

I'm flashing at Pindeldyboz today, with this piece I wrote a while ago. Love is a Colour, Green is a Taste is... a little kinky, with a twist at the end, but it feels seasonal for some reason. By way of complete contrast, Water's Edge, is at EDF today. A sad story but uplifting, I hope. Grateful for all comments, as always.

10 comments:

Madeline said...

All I can say is "whoa" - but I mean that in a good way! :)

You have a way of making the words lift off the page so their images walk and talk and breathe and live.

Oh, and I already commented over at EDF for Water's Edge. :)

Sarah Hilary said...

Thank you, Madeline, what a lovely response! And thank you for the comment at EDF. It feels a little odd to have two such different stories up at the same time...

Ragtag said...

I just read 'Love is a colour' bit. The imagery is out of this world! The sides of my face hurt just from reading about that darn fruit.

Sarah Hilary said...

Thank you, Ragtag! (If you're on LJ, I write Spooks fic. A lot. Well, Lucas is a gift - or he was in series 7.)

Lisa said...

Love is a colour, and love is your flash. I adore this one. It's written so I can feel every single word in my mouth like the zing of lime in the story. Fabulous writing. No wonder I'm such a fan!

Sarah Hilary said...

Thanks, Lisa!

WOMEN RULE WRITER said...

Oooh, love is a colour... is very teasing. Very tangibly scary/sexy. Love it.

Have a great Xmas, Sarah.

Nuala x

Sarah Hilary said...

Nuala, thank you! Your writing is so beautiful that I'm blushing like mad at the lovely things you say about mine. I shall quote you, mind!!

WOMEN RULE WRITER said...

Quote away!! I love *your* writing.

Sarah Hilary said...

Thanks, Nuala. Have a very Happy Christmas - Juno's first! x